Re: Like A Stone

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Stow yourself in her valise.

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A fine idea. Then I'll hope her husband doesn't open it.

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Link? What?

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What do you expect to miss most in her absence? My first guess was her disciplinary but effective instruction, but I suppose it could be her network of nordic grad students whom you find interesting-but-not-in-that-way.

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Your first guess is correct. Second would be the plain fun of swimming with a great swimmer who's also totally hot. Third would be the nordic network (not that it's done me any good).

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Gary: a link.

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And another.

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As a socialist I used to admire the Swedes, but since I found that they the ones behind the musical careers of Britney Spears, Jessica Simpson, and J-Lo, I've been hard put not to hate them all.

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But they make such good pancakes!

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With lingonberries! Mmmm.

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Hey, Benji, have you been to Tre Kroner? Yummy stuff, and, at least when I was going lo those many years ago, the staff was uniformly hott.

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6 & 7: Good thing you're not getting overly self-referential. I'm lazy enough to want the annotated version in the first place, I'm afraid. Less kind alternative: get a LiveJournal!

Because, you know, you should blog what I want you to blog, not what you want to blog. Because the world revolves around me, me, ME!

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The Hopleaf is in Andersonville, isn't it? Does one of you live near there, among the Swedes?

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Yes it is, but no, I don't think any of us does live near there. (There's also a good Iranian place (Reza's) in the neighborhood.)

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Swedes? Try "lesbians". Though lesbian Swedes, hmm...

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I could tell a story of a lesbian Swede...

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reza's, oh reza's.....

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I could tell a story of a lesbian Swede...

Ears have perked up across the Intarweb.

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Ears have perked up across the Intarweb.

Really? No one else seems that excited. But here goes:

I liked a pretty French boy named Vincent. He invited me to a party, but ignored me the whole night, paying attention to a Swedish girl instead. Couldn't blame him, really. She was almost insanely hot. Resembled Charlize Theron. But it was still a painful night: I didn't know anyone else at this party, and it was in Paris so no one else was remotely interested in talking to me, and I was more or less forced to stand by and watch him flirt with this woman. I tried to participate in the conversation but he could not have made it more clear that he wanted me to disappear. He was almost physically blocking me at one point, and I was about to give up and go home, when the Swedish woman touched my arm and started asking me questions, in a very friendly, warm manner. And then (ha!) at the end of the night she very pointedly asked me if I wanted to go back to her place for a drink. And I immediately said that sounded like a great idea, leaving a stunned Vincent in the dust. So satisfying. I can't even tell you.

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Nice try ac, but you still haven't told us how you know she was a lesbian.

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Well, she wasn't interested in Vincent, so she must have been a lesbian, right?

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Well I got some further proof later in the evening, if that's what you mean, Ogged.

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Precisely what I meant. Though I meant it in greater detail.

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I'll email you, if you really want to hear. But it's a little too hot for Unfogged. As someone around here might say.

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too hot for Unfogged

!!

I know of no such category.

No, don't email me; doesn't seem right not to share.

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You can email me; I don't mind not sharing.

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Well I got some further proof later in the evening

I'll bet ac is just talking about that big Xena poster that was on the Swede's wall.

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If anyone thinks a Xena poster is too hot for Unfogged, I'm closing up shop.

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Well, maybe it was one of those XXXena posters oft heard of in legends of yore (at least in certain circles).

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I have always been grateful to the Swedes for giving the world The Refused, but it sounds as if ac's going to make it apparent that the Swedish have been holding out on me.

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There once was a lesbian Swede

Who to our own ac decreed

That while Vincent's advances

Had terrible chances

Her own attempts might well succeed

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Not just hiatus; unfogged hiatus.

I like it. One point off for "decreed," which isn't quite the apposite verb.

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A misreading of the word "villanelle" into SB's limerick gave me a silly idea, which is really not villanelltic at all, but related to a different form whose name I can't remember.

There once was a lesbian Swede

Who to our own ac decreed

That while Vincent's advances

Had terrible chances

Her own attempts might well succeed.

Earlier had Vincent decreed

"Stand back, ac, and let me succeed!"

How could he know

It would be a no-go?

For this was a lesbian Swede.

As nights one another succeed,

And sour follows on Swede,

It's always complex

In matters of sex:

Thus have all gods decreed.

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I apologize for the sour/Swede thing.

I was thinking of the sestina.

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ben, ben, the sestina must have sestets, not quintets, and all the end words must be reused! apparently in a very particular order, too, which seems awfully rigid.

but hey, points for villanelltic, which does not appear to be a word, but seems absolutely correct.

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Not just hiatus; unfogged hiatus.

Oh, you noticed? Five days and then blammo, I'm back on the smack.

One point off for "decreed"

Yeah, that's not quite right. Change the second line to:

Whose appetites ac could read:
Better?

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Umm, but ac couldn't read the Swede's appetites: the Swede made them clear herself, in a too-hot-for-unfogged manner, and only later in the night.

Are you submitting this somewhere?

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No, I'm not really into submission.

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Dude, you'll never get tenure.

(One hears that line a lot at the Mineshaft.)

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Cite me harder!

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Whatever, you'll just get me hot for Chicago, then be all "No, MLA! MLA!"

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Well I got some further proof later in the evening

A Parisian poetry reading, perhaps?

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"Cite me harder."

And the crowd goes wild, chanting MoB MoB MoB....

Off to Reno. I'll let you know how the food is and whether or not anyone shoots anyone just to watch them die.

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Silvana, I know what the strictures for a sestina are. However, the limerick form doesn't allow for all the endings to be repeated very well, and I said "related to". Sheesh. A virtuouso performance and what do you get? Carping.

A Parisian poetry reading, perhaps?

Bookshelves lined with Colette?

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you'll just get me hot for Chicago

I wouldn't dare cross a man in a libibidinous frenzy.

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The real problem with SB's limerick is that the last line doesn't scan.

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If ac won't say directly what the "further proof" was, we might bound the sapphic signal space with a game of twenty questions.

Was it bigger than a breadbox?

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With whimsical zest I began

To hatch a poetical plan:

With Wolfson observing

I'd whip up a serving

Of limericks whose last lines didn't scan.

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That one's a lot better because of all the liquids in the last line, it reads as shorter than it is. If it were "lim'ricks" it would be perfect.

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OK, is no one else willing to admit that their blogcrush on ac just stopped being non-creepy (tm)?

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Are you still working that, Matt? If this is how she teases us on the blog, just imagine...

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From the resident gentleman to the salivating porn dog in just 14 days.

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If by 'tease' you mean saying she'll e-mail the rest of the story but not post, and then not posting, I'm not too worried. No means no, dude.

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SB--already lost that fight....

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Yeah, in what sense is that teasing?

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It's not teasing if you're willing to email everyone who asks.

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Did you ask, ogged?

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There seems something pimplike in your attitude towards me.

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Yeah Weiner, you're a pimp!

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58 to Ogged.

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Damn.

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A gentlemanly pimp.

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There seems something pimplike in your attitude towards me.

Is that good or bad?

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I did not ask. Didn't seem, uh, fraternal to be the only one to hear the story.

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Sigh. "Ogged, game, needs to work on," part DCIV...

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Wolfson asked.

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And did you just say "Ain't no fun if the homies can't have none"?

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Yes! That's what I mean!

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Does the singer then shoot a bunch of cops or something? I meant it in a good way.

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Ogged has just learned the lesson "you can't have it unless there's enough for everyone" real well.

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69: Lyrics. It's kind of amazing to be listening to a Snoop Dogg album and come across a track that's shockingly misogynistic in that context. (And yeah, I'm going to have to give up the "gentleman" thing for, like, a day now.)

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Regarding 24 and ac,

Sigh. Guys. How many times have I told you you can't chase?

You need to say something like "Wow" and wait. Maybe the story comes, maybe it doesn't.

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Actually, I didn't ask. I said that, unlike ogged, I was familiar with the idea of confidence, and therefore if she wanted to email me, I wouldn't feel obligated to tell everyone in creation.

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Are you trying to make some kind of point about speech acts, Ben? I think any reasonable person would interpret 26 as a request for e-mail as well as an expression of confidence.

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I was considering dropping a "perlocutionary" in 73. Basically, my goal in 73 was to effect a criticism of simpleminded speech-act theory by combining an overly literalist reading of the text (which does not, after all, contain an explicit request) with an Austinianly-aware reading of some aspects of the subtext. In this way I tried to show that while appeals to "a reasonable person" and how he (for let's not kid ourselves, the paradigm "reasonable person" among Oxbridge dons is a he) might interpret any given "utterance", all too frequently such a gloss is merely a stalking horse for the actual interpreter to advance his own agendum.

This is all explicated at greater length in my artist's statement.

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I hate when Wolfson cracks me up.

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Admit it, you snickered at "agendum".

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Huh. 75 is missing a clause.

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No it isn't.

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Yes it is.

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verb phrase

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Yeah that.

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Bingo!

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What could it have been, I wonder?

"are typically accepted at the Mineshaft"

"are as common as buttless chaps at the Mineshaft"

??

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Ogged, AFAIK you are the only buttless chap who is common at the Mineshaft.

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Buttless chaps are as common at the Mineshaft as people in the city.

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It's impolite to call someone "common", Matt.

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Dammit, SB, I was trying to set myself up for that joke.

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Uh, 86, uh, uh, clears throat, hello? Granted it's not quite right.

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Oh. But the thing is, people are actually common in the city, in the sense of 'common' meaning likely to be found there. Really the joke is clearer with a singular noun.

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Tell it to Wilde; he used "flowers".

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Yeah, and I didn't realize it was a joke until I deciphered 89. So mind too fine me. Walt Kelly has some good ones here.

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Ah, posted without actually bothering to make sense. Walt Kelly has some good jokes where some character is reading from the bird atlas that some bird is "common in thickets" and the mouse says "I don't think this young follow should be common in or out of thickets."

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The Wilde is only a joke if you know it's Wilde, or if it's said with an arched eyebrow.

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I had typed it with an arched eyebrow.

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A prehensile arched eyebrow.

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So ogged, are you in some kind of a rebound phase now, looking for another hot Olympic swimmer to hone your strokes? Should we expect you to start posting soon about your (achingly!) platonic exploits with "the Dane"?

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I'm still moving toward the bottom. The Swede will be around for another two months.

I almost posted today about the lifeguard with the absurd body who was swimming in a little two-piece today; but it seemed sexist, even for this place.

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with the absurd body

Like this?

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I'm still moving toward the bottom.

Whose?

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You guys so owe me, you know that, right?

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Yes, only it should be a gloomy Fin who just crawled out of a Kaurismaki film.

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Aki or Mika?

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swimming in a little two-piece today

No, that's a pretty big two-piece. Did it have a shallow end and a deep end?

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Now you're straining.

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Yes, apo, please show some restraint.

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apostropher is banned!

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Gloomy Fins are likely to be very good swimmers.

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Or at least important parts thereof.

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Hi, I'm Gloomy. This is my brother Dorsal, and this is my other brother Dorsal.

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I can't think of a clever rejoinder, but that's funny.

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